Thesis Whisperer found the Chapter "The relationship between topic, title, thesis and hypothesis" proved useful as a source of information on how to come up with a title for your thesis. She uses an example based on her sons hypothetical interest in doing a PhD about rocks! As follows:
Thesis Whisperer Jnr (aged 10 and 1/4) wants to do his PhD about “rocks” (with a side interest in gold). “Rocks” is a topic area, but there are a range of theses Thesis Whisperer Jnr would write on this topic depending on how he phrased the title, to whit:I found this simple example quite helpful in rethinking the title for my own thesis:
I have since used this example to help hundreds of students re-write variations of their thesis title in my workshops and it’s become a crowd favourite. It’s amazing how simply re-writing your title can help you refocus and give direction to a paper, a chapter or even a whole thesis. Ever since I have used this book to help me make all kinds of workshop material. In fact it has become my ultimate authority on everything thesis related, up to and including supervision and presentations.
- As a question: “What do school children know about rocks with gold in them?”
- As an exploration: “Rocks in ‘scrap heaps’ found in the Victorian gold districts”
- As a statement: “Why most school kids are not interested in rocks (even if there’s gold in them”
- As an investigation: “Rocks with gold in them: places they are most likely to be found”
- As a hypothesis: “If rocks have gold in them, they are more likely to be dug up”
- As a thesis: “rocks are cool, especially if there is gold in them”
- As a question: Why do we take snapshot photographs?”
- As an exploration: “Snapshots in family albums.”
- As a statement: “The reason we take snapshots is to remember.”
- As an investigation: “Snapshot photographs: why do we take them?”
- As a hypothesis: “If snapshots are memories can we forget them?”
- As a thesis: “The snapshot is a sociotechnical construct.”